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Friday, June 24, 2016

Partly Cloudy

We watched a short video called Partly Cloudy. We had to write descriptive sentences using adverbs as sentence starters to describe what happened. This is my story.

Partly cloudy

Swiftly the birds flew down to the wooden houses delivering cute baby kittens.
Slowly the big birds gave the cute little animals a home.
Then they flew into the nice soft clouds swiftly.
Magically the big fluffy clouds made little cute animals.
They bagged the little cute animals carefully.
Sadly there was a little grey cloud below.  
Soon bird came over to it.
The sad cloud was suddenly so happy.
The cloud made a crocodile and bagged it up.
Then the sad cloud made a ram.
Fastly the ram bucked the big bird.
The bird looked up and saw a happy bird.
Slowly he flew away with the ram.
Worriedly he got back not sure what he might find.
The sad cloud created a hedgehog.
He bagged it up and the bird took it away.
He flew to the cloud above.
The sad cloud got super angry striking lightning.
He started to cry creating rain below.
Happily the cloud above gave the bird armour.
Happily the sad cloud wiped away his tears.
He made an electric eel.
Softly they cuddled each other.


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