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Friday, February 16, 2018

Reading poetry #2


That rhyme is a main ‘clue’ that a piece of writing might be poetry.


Monday, February 12, 2018

Antonio's Bio Poem

Hello, Mrs B and Mrs Craig have helped me create a Bio Poem. Here it is. 


Antonio’s Bio Poem

Antonio
I am caring, sporty, energetic and helpful.
I am the son of Shona and Stanley.
I like my nana and blue vein cheese.
I miss my nana.
I fear spiders and heights.
I have won a Rippa Rugby tournament.
I want to see my cousins over in Wales.
I live in Skudders Beach

Spadotto

Published holiday recount


Hello, I have now fixed all of the mistakes in my Recount. I Hope you enjoy my published version more than my draft version because I turned all of the start of places into capital letters.



Published holiday recount

Yay! I said as I woke up. I was down at Taumuranui with my
nana and poppa. My poppa and me were going tobogganing on
Mount Ruapehu.

We both had our own toboggans to use. My nana put really hot
clothes on me. My poppa and I headed for Mount Ruapehu.
When we finally got there it wasn't as cold as we thought it
would be. It was really hot actually. I was sweating like a pig.
My poppa and I went down the slope a few times. I went down
the slope a bit more than my popa. After we finished
tobogganing we rode up the ski lifts. When we looked down it
was like looking out the window of a plane.

Me and my poppa had lunch. Then we rode the ski lift back
down again. We walked down to our car, we got in the car and
started driving back. While we were driving back we stopped
and played some mini golf. I won the game. We hopped in the
car and finally went home. In conclusion I had a great day.

Friday, February 9, 2018

Reading poetry 1

Learn: The difference between prose and poetry.

Create: A DLO which shows short texts sorted  into two groups; prose or poetry and which includes at least one image.


Thursday, February 8, 2018

Draft holiday recount

Draft Holiday recount

Yay! I said as I woke up. I was down at Taumuranui with my
nana and popa. My popa and me were going tobogganing on
mount ruapehu.


We both had our own toboggans to use. My nana put really hot
clothes on me. My popa and I headed for mount ruapehu.
When we finally got there it wasn't as cold as we thought it
would be. It was really hot actually. I was sweating like a pig.
My popa and I went down the slope a few times. I went down
the slope a bit more than my popa. After we finished
tobogganing we rode up the ski lifts. When we looked down it
was like looking out the window of a plane.

Me and my popa had lunch. Then we rode the ski lift back
down again. We walked down to our car, we got in the car and
started driving back. While we were driving back we stopped
and played some mini golf. I won the game. We hopped in the
car and finally went home. In conclusion I had a great day.

Wednesday, December 13, 2017

My Learning Graph

Here is my progress graph for this year. It shows my results for reading, writing, maths and spelling and how I improved over the year. I think I am doing great at maths.
 I  need to work harder at including more supporting ideas in my writing.

Learning Journey 2017

Reading
At age level
Term      1      2     3      4

Spelling -
Grade Spelling
Term   1      2      3     4  

Maths
Stage 6 by end of Year 5
End Stage 6 by end of Year 6                 E8
14.5-15+











Stage 7
E7
77
7

14-15yrs









Stage 6




13.5-14




5




Stage 5




13-14 yrs




4
9
19
21
26
Stage 4




12.5-13




Essential List
Term 1   2    3    4
Stage 2-3




12-13yrs




8




Term
1
2
3
4
11.5-12.5




7




Writing - Expected Levels
Year 5 - 3B by the end of Year 5
Year 6 - 3A by the end of Year
11-12yrs




6




10.5-11.5




5




Term
1
2
3
4
10-11yrs




4




Level
2A
3P
3A
3A
9.5-10.5




3





9-10yrs




2




Basic facts
T1
T2
T3
T4
8.5-9.5yrs




1





6
7
7
7

Tuesday, December 5, 2017

End of Term 4 Recount Test.

This is a screenshot of my results in our end of Term 4 recount writing test.
My teachers have worked out my average score for writing and I am at 3A.
This is above the National Standard for my year level.
I am doing great at structure and sentences.
I  need to work harder at vocabulary and ideas next year.
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